IELTS6.0必勝法〜ライティング編〜

①The flow chart gives the information about the process of manufacturing instant noodles.

②Generally, there are 8 stages in order to produce the instant noodles, which starts at the phase of storing flour into the storage silos, and ends when the flour become to the finished products as commodities.

③First, as I mentioned above, flour is stored in the silos before which is mixed with water and oil in the second stage. Next, the mixture is extended by using rollers, which is cut into strips in the next phase. Afterward, the strips are condensed and their shapes are converted into disks before they are cooked with oil and dried. Subsequently, the disks are set into cups with vegetables and spices. Finally, the cups are labelled and sealed so as to be sold in the shops. 

④To sum up, it is the first step to make the noodles, and then the noodles are put in the cups with other components and seasoning.

①Nowadays, there is one of the most debated topics that is whether euthanasia should be accepted or not. There are both merits and demerits when it comes to euthanasia.

②To begin with, some people say that euthanasia should be prohibited because that is against ethical issue.（反対意見） Euthanasia is that a doctor allows a patient to die because of various reasons; the main reason is the pain of medicine or medical treatment. In other words, the behavior is almost equal to that a doctor kill a patient. Killing a person would be against constitutions and laws which are established in almost all of the country. Also, no one knows whether a patient really hopes for dying except the patient himself or herself. For instance, a patient may pretend to want to die because of being worried about an expensive treatment and being a nuisance for his or her family, even if he or she wants to live in really. Everyone cannot read other person’s mind, so that is why euthanasia should not be carried out.

③Compared with this view, other people say that euthanasia should be recognized as one of the medical treatments since this can compensate the differences between a patient and a healthy person. （賛成意見）To illustrate, healthy people can have a choice to die by themselves when they want to do. However, patients cannot the choice because they are not able to even move freely. So, euthanasia is needed in order for everyone to have common right. Besides this, no matter how hard other people try to understand a feeling of a patient who are suffering from diseases and hope to end his or her life, they cannot. There are many patients who need euthanasia as well as ordinary people have a desire to escape hardships.

④Taking these views into consideration, both the support group and the opposite group have good and bad points each other. Although I would understand the opinion that is against euthanasia, I also believe another opinion that is for euthanasia.